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12 Responses to “I Shall Not Write Again”

1. on 08 Jun 2008 at 1:43 pm1    Manoy Doro

   I will not try to guess what those three words are. I may not get it. One thing i am sure of is your son, Joseph Alfonso(?), is your clone.

   
   
2. on 09 Jun 2008 at 2:45 am2    Alfonsoveck

   Thank you for the kind comment Manoy Doro. Yes, my son’s name is Joseph Alfonso III, nicknamed Joshua. Isn’t it funny how fathers always impart their frustrations to their sons?
   It’s not actually three words like the ‘structure, sound, sense’ requirement in writing a poem which I gave my son but three lines. So as not to keep anyone guessing anymore, the three lines I gave to my son are: the title, the first line and the last line of the poem.

   
   
3. on 09 Jun 2008 at 9:41 am3    eng

   well, they say poets are not made they are born.it clearly runs in your blood.
   IMPRESSIVE…

   
   
4. on 11 Jun 2008 at 9:56 pm4    ' ' ' ' ' iwin'

   i can’t say the same about my son, at least not yet, but he is showing a little inclination towards writing literature in english, but only time will tell if i’m even remotely right.

   
   
5. on 22 Jun 2008 at 3:50 pm5    Betchay

   This is a beautiful piece. I can’t guess either, this poem was written by 2 souls who are breathing as one.

   
   
6. on 23 Jun 2008 at 9:41 am6    Alfonsoveck

   Thank you eng, ‘’’’’iwin and Betchay! Your comments are most appreciated.

   
   
7. on 01 Jul 2008 at 6:58 pm7    Cherie

   ang galing ng bata!!! do you talk poetry over dinner?

   
   
8. on 07 Jul 2008 at 1:34 am8    Alfonsoveck

   Thanks Cherie. I don’t encourage talking poetry over dinner, lest we forget eating dinner.

   
   
9. on 08 Jul 2008 at 4:11 am9    ♥ n ë t t ë ♥

   Now I know that architecture and poetry really goes well together. Keep up the good work Boyet!Ü

   
   
10. on 14 Jul 2008 at 4:34 am10    Alfonsoveck

    Thank you for the insightful comment Marinette. If you think its good then I’ll try to keep up!

    
    
11. on 06 Oct 2008 at 10:59 pm11    virginia

    I wasn`t able to guess anymore which words that was….I was driven away by the poem it self. I forgotten already how simple one can simply start to write!
    I don`t know how old is your son but sure he writes beautifully…..

    
    
12. on 17 Oct 2008 at 10:31 pm12    alfonsoveck

    my son’s 15 years old, Virginia.

    i’m happy that you’re delighted with his poem and i want to thank you for appreciating his writing.

    
    

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